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If you don't love,
your life will flash before your eyes.
and you will be wondering what happened
to all your wasted time.

You try your hardest dwelling
on the what ifs,
and you wake up to see yourself
standing at the edge of a cliff.

Wishing you could rewind
trying to dig up what you had
to be back in the time,
where you were simply glad.

With your life hanging on your fingertips,
you realize that life isn't what you thought it would be,
and your heart might explode with doubt
but you take a step back and your simply free.
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this might sound cliche, but i honestly believe the love and faith will save you
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~AznOtaku9658 Jan 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The world is a cliche! As long as you have something to hold on you truly never will let go
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~koubara5 Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol it is, isn't it? but unfortunately some people don't have anything to hold on to(no matter what it is) so they walk mindlessly through life, then suddenly realize at the end that they wished they held on to something
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~AznOtaku9658 Jan 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
When you find people like that you try and help them but sometimes they just need to learn on their own. I believe that people could find something that's worth holding on it just takes time for them to realize that its important to them.
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~koubara5 Jan 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that's very true, wow we think a lot alike!
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~AznOtaku9658 Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've only found a couple of people that think like me but this is only my philosophy.
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~koubara5 Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hey that rhymed :P
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~AznOtaku9658 Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? :O
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~koubara5 Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ya it did! lol
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*inhonoredglory Jun 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Especially love and faith in God.
It's a lovely poem. It flows beautifully.
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~koubara5 Jun 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks bunches, you are far too kind :)
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